Thursday, May 29, 2014

Thinking, Narrative...



Journal--

 What is a narrative essay?  What are some characteristics of a narrative, based on your reading of AMY TAN?

So, what is a narrative?
Story in first person, “I”-  True-  2.5-5, imagery- appeal to the senses. and descriptive language-  5 senses.--  3-5 minute event, I don’t care.--  T- opic-  What it’s about.  En Media Res-  In the middle of…
A-udience- general audience.
P-urpose-  the reason you’re writing-  a message or theme?  Entertain- inform- Be who you are.


TS- continued… laterally.

Narrative Notes.

6-traits-      Conventions:-  Grammar.
                   Voice-  Personality.
                   Organization-  Help the reader understand with beg, mid, e.
                   Sentence Fluency-  the flow of sentences
                   Word Choice-  choosing the best word, being thoughtful.
                   Ideas and content-  What its about.

Writing Process-
Invent ideas.
Organize- plan.
Draft-  Tell the story fast
Revise-  Re-look.  Fix sentences and words
Edit-  Fix grammar—read out loud.
Publish-  Means it’s perfect.






Grading?

Narrative Assignment.

Drafting time…

HW-  Reading and Drafting.


Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Days one and two



1.     How does writing well and speaking well impact your life?

2.     Attendance.

3.     Thinking Skills Cont-  Interviews.

3 questions, each with a different thinking term, for a classmate to answer.

4.     TS cont.  Practice with a few.


Babe Smith has been killed. Police have rounded up six suspects, all of whom are known gangsters. All of them are known to have been near the scene of the killing at the approximate time that it occurred. All had substantial motives for wanting Smith killed. However, one of these suspected gangsters, Slinky Sam, has positively been cleared of guilt.

T  F  ?  1.                  Slinky Sam is known to have been near the scene of the killing of Babe Smith.
T  F  ?  2.                  All six of the rounded-up gangsters were known to have been near the scene of the murder.
T  F  ?  3.                  Only Slinky Sam has been cleared of guilt.
T  F  ?  4.                  All six of the rounded-up suspects were near the scene of Smith's killing at the approximate time that it took place.
T  F  ?  5.                  S. The police do not know who killed Smith.
T  F  ?  6.                  All six suspects are known to have been near the scene of foul deed.
T  F  ?  7.                  Smith's murderer did not confess of his own free will.
T  F  ?  8.                  Slinky Sam was not cleared of guilt.
T  F  ?  9.                  It is known that the six suspects were in the vicinity of the cold-blooded assassination.
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   A businessman had just turned off the lights in the store when a man appeared and demanded money. The owner opened a cash register. The contents of the cash register were scooped up and the man sped away. A member of the police force was notified promptly.
           
T  F  ?  1.                  A man appeared after the owner had turned off his store lights.
T  F  ?  2.                  The robber was a man.
T  F  ?  3.                  The man who appeared did not demand money.
T  F  ?  4.                  The man who opened the cash register was the owner.
T  F  ?  5.                  The store-owner scooped up the contents of the cash register and ran away.
T  F  ?  6.                  Someone opened a cash register.
T  F  ?  7.                  After the man, who demanded the money, scooped up the contents of the cash register, he ran away.
T  F  ?  8.                  While the cash register contained money, the story does not state how much.
T  F  ?  9.                  The robber demanded money of the owner.
T  F  ?  10.              The robber opened the cash register.
T  F  ?  11.              After the store lights were turned off a man appeared.
T  F  ?  12.              The robber did not take the money with him.
T  F  ?  13.              The robber did not demand money of the owner.
T  F  ?  14.              The owner opened a cash register.
T  F  ?  15.              The age of the store-owner was not revealed in the story.
T  F  ?  16.              Taking the contents of the cash register with him, the man ran out of the store.
T  F  ?  17.              The story concerns a series of events in which only three persons are referred to: the owner of the store, a man who demanded money. and a member of the police force.
T  F  ?  18.              The following events were included in the story: someone demanded money. a cash register was opened, its contents were scooped up, and a mall dashed out of the store.
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HW-  Read Fish Cheeks, by Amy Tan and create 10 TS questions for another in class to answer.
HW-  Read "Mother Tongue," by Amy Tan and the same....














1. Journal- Why is English the most important class in your college career? Is it? Any job requires command of the English language.

SWE- Language = expression/communication- Language gets you what want. English is the keys to the kingdom.

 2. Attendance.

3. Notes, Notes, and Notes.

4. Thinking Skills notes and practice.

Analyze: to determine the nature and parts.
Connect: to place in relationship to something else
Compare: to point out similarities.
Contrast: to point out differences.
Clarify: to make clear.
Classify: To arrange in like groups.
Distinguish: to tell the difference b/t two things.
Define: to determine essential qualities.
Explain: to make understandable.
Elaborate: to tell more.
Evaluate: to determine the worth
Interpret: to put in other words
Identify: to name
Predict: to point out a future occurrence
Summarize: to tell in a short version.
Synthesize: To combine.

5. HW- Essay- How have you found that thinking carefully has helped you in your life? Provide an introduction, example/s, and a conclusion. MLA format.

Important Notes/Decisions/Rules:

Books Monday- June 2nd.
Exchange Contact information.
1. Arrive on time.
2. Respect your classmates, be constructive and actively participate.
 3. Don’t talk when others are.
4. Raise your hand to speak.
5. Be nice to others and their situations.
6. Can’t have more than 4 absences.
7. If you have +3 absences, you’ll likely earn a C.
8. Do your work on time! Reading and drafting.
9. Do what I say and ask why later.
10. Cell phones on vibrate- be respectful.
11. Keep our space clean.
 12. Own up to your mistakes-integrity.