Wed

1.       Journal-   In your daily, day to day, life, what’s a social problem you encounter that bothers you?

1.5-  HW review… What’s the point of it?

2.       MLA Format, Experts

3.       Vocab Quiz

4.       HW Practice, cont.

5.       Work Shop Groups and Reading.

6.       Editing Time…. Questions?

7.       Next Essay Notes….

Because Hamlet uses words like “Foul” and “pestilent” and “vapors” to describe what he sees.  If something is foul, it is bad smelling or gross.  A pestilence is a plague, another negative image, and vapors are usually dangerous.  All of these words carry a negative connotation, so Hamlet must be unhappy with his world.

Editing Group-

1.        Underline the thesis

2.       How many paragraphs are there?  Should be 5 or 8.

3.       Circle any typos.

4.       Circle any areas where you think there is a mistake.

5.       What’s the topic?

6.       What’s the purpose?  Do they inform or persuade or?

7.       Are paragraphs in the right order?

8.       Are the grounds in the paragraphs matching and in the same order?

MCD/ BK

MC Food

1.       Fries

a.       Crispiness

b.      saltiness

2.       Burgers

a.       Bun

b.      Burger

c.       toppings

3.       Shakes

a.       Thickness

b.      Temperature

Problem Solution:

Homelessness in Central Phoenix-

Personal story or interview. (1)

Define:  Homelessness- (1)

Prove there’s a problem in Phx-  Comparative Statistics. (1)

Scope of the problem. (1)

Why people are homeless. (generate empathy) (2-3)

Survey current solutions. (3)

Offer a solution. (call to action) (1)

Abrasive

Bilk

Covert

Engender

Hangar

Knotty

Nuance

Plagiarism

Renown

Tangent